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Array ( [sid] => 140175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => will I remember [time] => 2008-02-01 17:18:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => walking through the woods ,
when the rain falls,
a scent of pine,
that fills the woods,
precious times that i miss,
i wish i was there again,

where did the time go,
that i had lost so much,
the times when we laughed,
the times that we shared dreams,
Oh how i wish we were there again,

time has caught up with us,
we both know it's true,
we try to keep the memories,
of what we had together,
Oh how I wish i could remember,,

I've seen people who couldn't remember there names,,
I felt sad, for they couldn't remember their loves,
I pray that I'm gone before I forget her,,

craig s, meeks [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

will I remember

Contributed by spooky on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

walking through the woods ,
when the rain falls,
a scent of pine,
that fills the woods,
precious times that i miss,
i wish i was there again,

where did the time go,
that i had lost so much,
the times when we laughed,
the times that we shared dreams,
Oh how i wish we were there again,

time has caught up with us,
we both know it's true,
we try to keep the memories,
of what we had together,
Oh how I wish i could remember,,

I've seen people who couldn't remember there names,,
I felt sad, for they couldn't remember their loves,
I pray that I'm gone before I forget her,,

craig s, meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2008-02-01 17:18:46]
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Re: will I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:23:21 PM AEST
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Craig,
this had such a mix of emotion in it. I am never good at saying what I mean to say...... beauty, touched with tears in this write my friend.. The scent of pine yes I smell it too......

Michelle

Re: will I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Writing_The_Sun on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 05:24:46 PM AEST
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Great.... Absoutely Amazing.... Truly amazing...

Re: will I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 2nd February 2008 @ 02:34:16 AM AEST
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This is truly an excellent write, the years of time just go by so quickly..Memories last forever even in the absent minded we forget faces but it is our fate!!

Beautiful write made me sad and tears wanted to fall, but we live on even without each other for a time..
God Bless!!

Re: will I remember (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 4th February 2008 @ 06:36:46 PM AEST
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Very good work here.
This is really an awesome write, very powerfull!
big huggs,
emy
In answer to your comment on my write.
The words are the luv of money is the root of all evil.
therefore the word is he can't luv if all he wants is more money.
He never could bye me altho he tried for years.

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