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Array ( [sid] => 140144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Again [time] => 2008-01-31 13:34:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I woke up to a terrible dream
Still feeling hopeless like before
Wonder how long this will last
I thought that’s what pills were for.

I never thought I’d be one of those kids
Depressed, needing happy pills to survive
Then I think of what I’ve been going through
And I begin to see why,

The yelling and slow motion flashbacks
Of things that never happened
Fill my mind with useless thoughts,
And fuel my depression

Sometimes I don’t know what’s real or not
That’s how I am with you,
I pretend we’re back in high school
When we were the inseparable two.

The tears start to fall
As I think about the worst
My chronic overanalyzation
Might be getting worse

If I had known back then
What I know now
I never would have been your friend,
I’d spare our good times and love
To save myself from becoming who I am

My heart hurts from this torture
I don’t know if I can make it through.
I’m slowly moving on these days,
Taking my time to forget you.
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Again

Contributed by ace on Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 01:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I woke up to a terrible dream
Still feeling hopeless like before
Wonder how long this will last
I thought that’s what pills were for.

I never thought I’d be one of those kids
Depressed, needing happy pills to survive
Then I think of what I’ve been going through
And I begin to see why,

The yelling and slow motion flashbacks
Of things that never happened
Fill my mind with useless thoughts,
And fuel my depression

Sometimes I don’t know what’s real or not
That’s how I am with you,
I pretend we’re back in high school
When we were the inseparable two.

The tears start to fall
As I think about the worst
My chronic overanalyzation
Might be getting worse

If I had known back then
What I know now
I never would have been your friend,
I’d spare our good times and love
To save myself from becoming who I am

My heart hurts from this torture
I don’t know if I can make it through.
I’m slowly moving on these days,
Taking my time to forget you.

Copyright Â© ace ... [ 2008-01-31 13:34:19]
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Re: Again (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 07:06:13 PM AEST
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I hear ya.
Setting your own pace is a good thaNG.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Again (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Sunday, 10th February 2008 @ 02:47:04 AM AEST
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Hey nice poem. I've been separated from my ex for six years now and I still can't forget about her. Your poem sounds like something I would write. Good piece. Take care

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