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Array ( [sid] => 140100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the best of her [time] => 2008-01-29 11:37:22 [hometext] => when i write a poem i write whatever is in my head, and uncensored. i was bored when i wrote this [bodytext] => everyday that she keeps it locked up inside,
makes it that much harder for her to hide,
the feelings that she feels for him are strong,
she's felt this way all along,
she's afraid of how he'll react,
his hand and her face seem to automaticaly attract,
so she puts it aside,
as the days go by,
i begin to wonder "why?",
she puts up with what she does,
both physicaly and mentaly strong it's hard to knock her down,
even on her toughest days you won't see her frown,
she had let it go too long,
and in the blink of an eye the teenage girl i used to know was gone,
so loving and kind and full of life,
never seen a heart so open with love,
now it's surrounded by a big concrete wall and barbwire,
he won't get the best of her again,
that i will make sure of,
if it's the last thing i do [comments] => 5 [counter] => 314 [topic] => 71 [informant] => ribbons_and_lace09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

the best of her

Contributed by ribbons_and_lace09 on Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 11:37:22 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets

everyday that she keeps it locked up inside,
makes it that much harder for her to hide,
the feelings that she feels for him are strong,
she's felt this way all along,
she's afraid of how he'll react,
his hand and her face seem to automaticaly attract,
so she puts it aside,
as the days go by,
i begin to wonder "why?",
she puts up with what she does,
both physicaly and mentaly strong it's hard to knock her down,
even on her toughest days you won't see her frown,
she had let it go too long,
and in the blink of an eye the teenage girl i used to know was gone,
so loving and kind and full of life,
never seen a heart so open with love,
now it's surrounded by a big concrete wall and barbwire,
he won't get the best of her again,
that i will make sure of,
if it's the last thing i do

Copyright © ribbons_and_lace09 ... [ 2008-01-29 11:37:22]
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Re: the best of her (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 02:52:03 PM AEST
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Well for goodness sake get bored more often.
This is definently fine reading.
Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
huggs,
emy

Re: the best of her (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 03:03:19 PM AEST
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Terrific write, it says volumes.

Michelle

Re: the best of her (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 09:12:02 PM AEST
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Great poem. flows well and has a lot of feeling to it. like emy said, get bored more often :P

Re: the best of her (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST
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very nice write. I realy liked the end..."he won't get the best of her again,
that i will make sure of,
if it's the last thing i do"

those are some powerfull lines..

Re: the best of her (User Rating: 1 )
by gummibear199 on Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 04:57:11 PM AEST
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this is an excellent write. moved me to tears. man you have got a talent. keep it up i like reading your stuff

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