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Array ( [sid] => 140062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Uncouth Ending [time] => 2008-01-28 02:14:34 [hometext] => this is an interesting little poem i wrote some time ago. i believe i was drinking at the time but i think it is about how we live our life surrounded by people yet we die and we die alone because no one can share in the moment of death. [bodytext] => At death do we part
How do we leave untouched by truth
Yet we exist with purpose,
we have a place to start
And still we leave concealed,
In a way uncouth.
We exist here in surplus
Here i stand in the light
Here i stand plain in sight
This is where i say goodnight
And to you all i say goodbye [comments] => 4 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 73 [informant] => Poetic_Punk [notes] =>

Edited for spelling, as requested. - Moderator_14 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Uncouth Ending

Contributed by Poetic_Punk on Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 02:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

At death do we part
How do we leave untouched by truth
Yet we exist with purpose,
we have a place to start
And still we leave concealed,
In a way uncouth.
We exist here in surplus
Here i stand in the light
Here i stand plain in sight
This is where i say goodnight
And to you all i say goodbye

Copyright © Poetic_Punk ... [ 2008-01-28 02:14:34]
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Re: Uncouth Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 07:05:57 AM AEST
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Certainly abstract, yet, it was an interesting write, and to think about. Abstract is my favourite, to do...Will read more.

Brew~ aka Dayna

Re: Uncouth Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 12:17:33 PM AEST
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Very interesting write, enjoyable to read and ponder on.

Michelle

Re: Uncouth Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 29th January 2008 @ 05:53:10 AM AEST
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cant say im a fan of abstract writing, certainly drawing i am though...

it is very true we can never share our moment of death and many have a morbid interest in what it would feel like. i mean i would like to know what it feels like but i wouldnt want to actually be dead at the end of it... ah im weird lol

i liked this though, made me stop and think about something else other than what my recent write has been about...thanks

gen xx

Re: Uncouth Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Tweeky on Friday, 1st February 2008 @ 09:45:53 AM AEST
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In my line of work ..I often deal with death ..and its the most difficult thing to deal with .. I feel that when a person dies ..there soul leaves the body ...the body is left but just an empty shell . .
Good poem , well done .
claire
xx

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