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Last Breath

Contributed by Glitch on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You don't realize it yet I fear you never will but, here I am standing in your door way the way I've always been.....watching you get put through so much.....and here I am, unable to touch.....when will I be the one?......do you even care?.....this is so unfair...to have my heart broken in two.....all over my feelings of loving you....chasing isn't what I'm doing......waiting I guess is more the term.....for I'm not sure what else to do unable to move on anymore, unable to not care.....but just stand there....and stare.......I know all the guys say"I love you"....but there's only a select few.....that actually mean it.....and here I am not lying but dieing.....whispering one last breath........"I Love You".......

Copyright © Glitch ... [ 2008-01-27 15:14:29]
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Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 07:05:30 PM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 08:26:45 PM AEST
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could do with a bit more structure but not bad

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