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Array ( [sid] => 140035 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside the insane mind [time] => 2008-01-27 01:09:50 [hometext] => My latest peice of writing, first abstract poem i have written in some time, basically its a journy through a tired and insane mind, as the tittle sugests [bodytext] => To find me here and creep upon this place
Yet by the light we fall too late
A dark and sinister liquid grace
That feeds on man and his need to hate
Your thoughtful soul is lost inside your face
And to find its path is to follow its fate
In the dark the worm quickens in pace
Its dread lost inside at any rate

To find what you will discover in this place
yet to let the light in to late
A strange and somewhat sickened grace
That lets one fall victim to its lusting hate
Your unknown deeds lurk upon your face
And weave entwined in your fate
In your chest the heart loses pace
It is to die that men do highly rate
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Inside the insane mind

Contributed by Poetic_punk on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 01:09:50 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

To find me here and creep upon this place
Yet by the light we fall too late
A dark and sinister liquid grace
That feeds on man and his need to hate
Your thoughtful soul is lost inside your face
And to find its path is to follow its fate
In the dark the worm quickens in pace
Its dread lost inside at any rate

To find what you will discover in this place
yet to let the light in to late
A strange and somewhat sickened grace
That lets one fall victim to its lusting hate
Your unknown deeds lurk upon your face
And weave entwined in your fate
In your chest the heart loses pace
It is to die that men do highly rate

Copyright © Poetic_punk ... [ 2008-01-27 01:09:50]
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Re: Inside the insane mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 01:58:12 AM AEST
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Deep write,I enjoy reading your work..
Nice

Re: Inside the insane mind (User Rating: 1 )
by UnknownLegend on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 05:27:32 AM AEST
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to die for glory, grace or as a martyr is mans greatest and least attained wish. So why does man cling like ivy to life and all that befalls it...? Nice place to visit.... but don't stay here ....so much lovelier things to write about.

Re: Inside the insane mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 08:55:19 AM AEST
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dont worry unknownlegend, it is more of a coment on the way man thinks and a sickend society and i do not wish to stay there, :P

Re: Inside the insane mind (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 07:09:48 AM AEST
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Deep meanings, with this one, yet agreed dont stay with where this could go.....ppl are strange beings, seems alot of them have gotten even stranger , lately. But you have to laugh some, and be differ to live in this life. Good post.

brew~

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