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My Place

Contributed by UnknownLegend on Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 04:14:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



My Place

The world I see appears to be, a multi cornered place
with many a different people and many a different face
I wish I knew the words ..... thus so I could describe
of this little corner and this mind I choose to hide
In this little dim lit place, where I choose to live
with little left to offer and so much less to give
Some they may not realize this place they too reside
where my little world and theirs, sometimes they do collide
It may not all be pleasant ... it may not all be sweet
I may at times appear to be, dust beneath your feet
the dust you try your feet wipe clean or try to shake away
cause if my corner you chose to come, ask not, me go away
so visit me if you will but, leave no parting gifts
if what you feel my space to be, to decorate me with
Just say "Oh my, what a pretty place with such a lovely mind"
Or leave a kiss upon my cheek .... and leave me far behind.




Copyright © UnknownLegend ... [ 2008-01-25 04:14:05]
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Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 08:49:13 AM AEST
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Hi,
first of all I loved the right along with the note above.
I hope you do not leave here.

Second....

this has gone on for along time. Read my How Do You Rate poem, it was geared for the what we called one star rater. I believe the person is back only this time leaving 1 or 3 ratings and no comment.

I would imagine this dumb dumb dim wit does not read one word just goes from top of page to bottom leaving their mark LOL..... kind of like a little dog leaving pee marks on tree's ROFLMAO..

Anyway.... just thought I would let you know about this..

Michelle


Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Punk on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 02:29:08 AM AEST
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Great poem, this poem is wat this site is about, reading throu the poems every now and then you find a poem like this that is great and unknownlegend i like your style of writing and you have some great works, keep it up looking forward to reading more of your works.

ps, as for the rating and not commenting issue i agree, it seems to be the same peole who write all the comments


Re: My Place (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 11:17:02 AM AEST
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WEll seems they are too lazy...People seem to fall more and more into that catorgorey, these days..But hey I am calling the kettle black..I sometimes have done that.not bc I dont read, bc I am tired or busy....SORRY!!!!!!!! But I do try and leave comments..I really do.:D

brew~




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