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Array ( [sid] => 139998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trapped [time] => 2008-01-24 21:58:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Feeling trapped within these walls
as I stumble with each fall
I try to hold my head up high
so no-one ever sees me cry
But in my mind I scream with fear
painting pictures very clear
Please tell me this will go away
for it can't always be this way
I often wonder if it's me
it seems that no-one else can see
pain which dwells deep in my soul
holding tight, not letting go
Yet, these scars which I wear
tell a story I now bare
Scars I know can never heal
reminding me this is real
Tomorrow is another day
and as I stumble on my way
these voices screaming in my head
are silent whispers now instead

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Trapped

Contributed by eternal_sorrows on Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 09:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Feeling trapped within these walls
as I stumble with each fall
I try to hold my head up high
so no-one ever sees me cry
But in my mind I scream with fear
painting pictures very clear
Please tell me this will go away
for it can't always be this way
I often wonder if it's me
it seems that no-one else can see
pain which dwells deep in my soul
holding tight, not letting go
Yet, these scars which I wear
tell a story I now bare
Scars I know can never heal
reminding me this is real
Tomorrow is another day
and as I stumble on my way
these voices screaming in my head
are silent whispers now instead

Copyright © eternal_sorrows ... [ 2008-01-24 21:58:23]
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Re: Trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by deviled_brat_4_u on Friday, 25th January 2008 @ 02:50:36 PM AEST
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The continuousness I get when I read this makes me feel as though I am in a mad house, tied up and bound, forced to hear and endure nothing but mental (probably physical) pain and agony, with little if not any control. I love it and I can relate. -_- Great job ^_^

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