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Bitter Love, My Dearest
Contributed by
disgracefully-yours
on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 03:39:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Leave me alone
And dont make it worse
Bitter love, my dearest
Is a curse
What kind of love is it anyway
If it poisons
And gives your life away.
Realise that, promise me
You'll do yourself a favour
Even if you never realised how you treated me
Turned my friends against me
And trapped me in my own confused purgatory.
Purge yourself,
Release you're guilt.
You're responsible,
Pay for it.
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disgracefully-yours
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2008-01-18 03:39:41]
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Re: Bitter Love, My Dearest
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 04:21:57 AM AEST
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Deep write..
Blessings |
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Re: Bitter Love, My Dearest
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 01:53:34 PM AEST
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i liked where this was going but i felt like it was finished too early... im not criticising your work because i really like it, just maybe you didnt quite get everything you wanted into it?
just my feeling on it.
i love the first stanza, sounds like it could be an intro to a very heavy dark song. |
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