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Scars on their cheeks and broken hips
Cuts on their wrists and grazes on their chest
This is the dark carnival of what is perfect

A vampire child, a lost for blood
A molested teenager, desperate to cut
Sleeping on razorblades, biting their necks
This is their carnival, and your next

Prettiness is not found in anyway
Being beautiful puts them to shame
Complexions are lost in a bout of drug abuse
Because in being perfect, there is no use

Beauty is a curse on the world
These are the only ones who see
The ones who a pretty on the inside
The ones who dare to bleed
They see right through your makeup
They see right through your eyes
They see right through your skin
Right to your inside

Their hair is matted and their cheeks are red
In this dark carnival your the only one who cares
Worried about what they see, but they look past your eyes
Right to what you are, right on your inside [comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => amber_vonHorror [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Perfect Carnival of the Broken Immaculate

Contributed by amber_vonHorror on Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 12:09:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bloodshot eyes and bleeding lips
Scars on their cheeks and broken hips
Cuts on their wrists and grazes on their chest
This is the dark carnival of what is perfect

A vampire child, a lost for blood
A molested teenager, desperate to cut
Sleeping on razorblades, biting their necks
This is their carnival, and your next

Prettiness is not found in anyway
Being beautiful puts them to shame
Complexions are lost in a bout of drug abuse
Because in being perfect, there is no use

Beauty is a curse on the world
These are the only ones who see
The ones who a pretty on the inside
The ones who dare to bleed
They see right through your makeup
They see right through your eyes
They see right through your skin
Right to your inside

Their hair is matted and their cheeks are red
In this dark carnival your the only one who cares
Worried about what they see, but they look past your eyes
Right to what you are, right on your inside

Copyright © amber_vonHorror ... [ 2008-01-18 00:09:31]
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Re: Perfect Carnival of the Broken Immaculate (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 03:15:19 AM AEST
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This is creepy, creepy but also a very nicr write!!!

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