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Array ( [sid] => 139842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a boy and a girl [time] => 2008-01-16 08:04:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => he holds her tight

as they sit on the bed of the truck

looking up at the stars

without a care in the world

caught up in the moment

he gets up and turns the radio on

and they slow dance all night long

he said he loved her

she said she loved him

he said he meant it

her eyes started to water and she held him closer

they saw a shooting star

they made a wish

he asked if hers came true

she yes it has

you love me and mean it

she asked if his came true

he said yes

i know what it feels like to fall in love
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ribbons_and_lace09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
a boy and a girl

Contributed by ribbons_and_lace09 on Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 08:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



he holds her tight

as they sit on the bed of the truck

looking up at the stars

without a care in the world

caught up in the moment

he gets up and turns the radio on

and they slow dance all night long

he said he loved her

she said she loved him

he said he meant it

her eyes started to water and she held him closer

they saw a shooting star

they made a wish

he asked if hers came true

she yes it has

you love me and mean it

she asked if his came true

he said yes

i know what it feels like to fall in love




Copyright © ribbons_and_lace09 ... [ 2008-01-16 08:04:32]
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Re: a boy and a girl (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 04:57:19 PM AEST
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this is a very sweet first love kinda write.. I enjoyed reading this.. very sweet!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: a boy and a girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 03:51:34 AM AEST
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You have a knack for allowing the reader to feel as if they are right there beside you......sharing in each emotion.

I love the simple approach you have to writing.
Very well done
Roses
Larry




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