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Array ( [sid] => 13984 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Dont Wave [time] => 2003-03-09 16:00:00 [hometext] => Written on air plane a month ago [bodytext] => A drafty yet chivalrous wind
is billowing in , baleful baying like a
sleight of sequestered hounds
traverse the strudled nights sky clouds
Forbidden stratosphere visible
Tunneling its way in the miniature cottage
with the prop like resemblance
Did we beseige the piquantly
unfulfilled and empty homage ?
Along with the whirlwind
in red hued tempremental motion
Not just a notion
A barrage of unearthly fragrances
accosting one another
then reuniting with emotional turbulence
And with valid coherent recollections prove worthy we traversed that path
groping towards refuge
That path pastilled with shards of coloured glass all heavy accented hues
Shards random and glistening in the null of the midday sun
Temptestous yet staid
Tragically uninspired
The props are hoisted away now.
The wind still bold and adrogynous.
And I have had the notions. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 43 [informant] => CARAAAAA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Dont Wave

Contributed by CARAAAAA on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A drafty yet chivalrous wind
is billowing in , baleful baying like a
sleight of sequestered hounds
traverse the strudled nights sky clouds
Forbidden stratosphere visible
Tunneling its way in the miniature cottage
with the prop like resemblance
Did we beseige the piquantly
unfulfilled and empty homage ?
Along with the whirlwind
in red hued tempremental motion
Not just a notion
A barrage of unearthly fragrances
accosting one another
then reuniting with emotional turbulence
And with valid coherent recollections prove worthy we traversed that path
groping towards refuge
That path pastilled with shards of coloured glass all heavy accented hues
Shards random and glistening in the null of the midday sun
Temptestous yet staid
Tragically uninspired
The props are hoisted away now.
The wind still bold and adrogynous.
And I have had the notions.

Copyright © CARAAAAA ... [ 2003-03-09 16:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Dont Wave (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 06:21:01 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was interesting,and left me wondering, what next?

Re: The Dont Wave (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Nameless_One on Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:25:01 AM AEST
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Hah I know the feeling dude...

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