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Array ( [sid] => 139717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remembering [time] => 2008-01-11 02:57:48 [hometext] => In rememberance of my first husband who died tragically in a construction accident on March 15, 1989. [bodytext] => Remembering

Remembering the day you died
Still brings about such pain inside
The shock I felt, it shattered me
An ashen face for all to see
And horrified at what I heard
I could not comprehend the words
Your precious life they could not save
So jarred, I could but rant and rave
How could you go and leave me here
To raise alone our kids, I fear
This pain so strong will never go
For its embraced me tightly so
And strangled joy inside of me
Gone is who I’m meant to be
But wait, though I may be bereft
I realize much life is left
So I press on and trust in God
To carry me when times are hard
Then slowly death gives way to life
And I become another’s wife
Love that was gone has been revived
And I give thanks that I’m alive
For God has blessed me with new love
And smiling I look up above
I know he’s glad that I’ve moved on
And stopped my mourning that he’s gone
So thank you God that he’s with you
In heaven, that I always knew
And I will live until the day
You call me to come home to stay.

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Remembering

Contributed by MemeCaroline on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 02:57:48 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Remembering

Remembering the day you died
Still brings about such pain inside
The shock I felt, it shattered me
An ashen face for all to see
And horrified at what I heard
I could not comprehend the words
Your precious life they could not save
So jarred, I could but rant and rave
How could you go and leave me here
To raise alone our kids, I fear
This pain so strong will never go
For its embraced me tightly so
And strangled joy inside of me
Gone is who I’m meant to be
But wait, though I may be bereft
I realize much life is left
So I press on and trust in God
To carry me when times are hard
Then slowly death gives way to life
And I become another’s wife
Love that was gone has been revived
And I give thanks that I’m alive
For God has blessed me with new love
And smiling I look up above
I know he’s glad that I’ve moved on
And stopped my mourning that he’s gone
So thank you God that he’s with you
In heaven, that I always knew
And I will live until the day
You call me to come home to stay.





Copyright © MemeCaroline ... [ 2008-01-11 02:57:48]
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Re: Remembering (User Rating: 1 )
by kaycas on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 10:18:24 AM AEST
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It was a sad story with a happy ending and well written. It is always good to know that people can move on in their lives and never forget their past love.


Re: Remembering (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 02:59:51 PM AEST
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I can only imagine the pain his death brought. But I am glad that the sun is shining for you again and that you have moved on, without forgetting him...
Hugs
Jenni




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