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SultryRose's Signatures

I once called him son-in-law.
Was there when was called.
Twas easy to see his mind control.
This country *****, he didn't know.

He said, " if she wants to start ****
then **** what she'll git".
She said, tell him, "Bring it on sucker".
My middle name is ****, trucker".

So we jus kept throwing him rope.
He can't run from God control.
He dug his own little play
'causing him to loose it all, I'd say.

Evil can't hide very long
'cause Jesus blood's eternally strong.
You tried to play with total luv
Cheatin on a sweet girl, Bub.

You lost your own daughter, it's true.
Only 15, you left her alone, blue.
Think twice before you cheat.
Now all your rags are at your feet.

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MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>>

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:27:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

SultryRose's Signatures

I once called him son-in-law.
Was there when was called.
Twas easy to see his mind control.
This country *****, he didn't know.

He said, " if she wants to start ****
then **** what she'll git".
She said, tell him, "Bring it on sucker".
My middle name is ****, trucker".

So we jus kept throwing him rope.
He can't run from God control.
He dug his own little play
'causing him to loose it all, I'd say.

Evil can't hide very long
'cause Jesus blood's eternally strong.
You tried to play with total luv
Cheatin on a sweet girl, Bub.

You lost your own daughter, it's true.
Only 15, you left her alone, blue.
Think twice before you cheat.
Now all your rags are at your feet.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2008-01-10 15:27:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 06:27:21 PM AEST
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As always you are one of a kind my friend, and stylish and straight from the heart, don't
change, this is another priceless emystar
shoot from the hip work of art . . .

((((emystar))))

Ben

Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 03:45:49 AM AEST
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I would like to disagree with the poster of the first comment. I've never known a work of art to use obvious misspellings. For instance "luv"? That little tid-bit, along with the rhyming of what I assume was the f-word with the word "trucker", and the use of the completely odd-ball and downright strange terms "Jesus blood" and "God control" totally ruined the small vestige of meaning this poem had for me.

Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 05:54:19 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write to me..I really enjoyed reading it..

God Bless

& Much Love My Friend In poetry..

Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 09:10:52 PM AEST
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This is in responce to joe evil's comment.
Your assumption was/is tottally wrong. He is a truck driver.
As far as the spelling of my words being that I've been writing since 1979, I figure I've earned the right to spell and speak the way I wish. Not to worry tho, You aren't the first and will not be the last that's displeased with the way I do things so just turn the page if you don't like my work. Ofcourse if you're just reading to find fault then by all means be my guest.

Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 02:05:29 AM AEST
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Very powerful iimagery with strong emotional content. The poem gets to a real primal, tell it like it is level.

Well done

Will

Re: MIDDLE NAME IS>>>>>>>>>> (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 08:16:42 PM AEST
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Despite the other 'comment', I believe it to be good stuff! And it's 'your' expression. So why would it matter that it isn't done as another would? I got the ryhme scheme...the # of "*'s" is pretty much a dead giveaway. Very emotional and evocative, I must say. I am guessing by the report that he got his just desserts.
thanks for sharing, dear lady...

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