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Array ( [sid] => 139692 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Country days [time] => 2008-01-10 03:06:37 [hometext] => This is one I wrote a few months ago after retrurning from a great holidays in the great outdoors, hope you like it!!! [bodytext] => Still plains
Open fields,
Light rain,
Is this real,

Starry dust
In gentle waves
Cosmic ribbons
Follow days,

Sleepy lakes
At misty dawns,
Knife like water
Thrown in storms,

Trembling mountains
Magical trees,
We grip there branches
In the breeze,

Darker days
Winter chills
Steaming kettles
On the sills,

Grassy chasms
Pierce the land
Great phantasms
Haunt the strand,

Shadowed garden
Picket fence
Summer
lets us sleep in tents,

Lying in the
Mountain shrouds
Tiredly tracing
Pathless clouds

Limestone caves
We brought the torch
And ran from nothing
Back to our porch,

Perfect nights
Full of laughs
In pure delight
At natures craft…
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 44 [informant] => zenith66 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

Country days

Contributed by zenith66 on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:06:37 AM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

Still plains
Open fields,
Light rain,
Is this real,

Starry dust
In gentle waves
Cosmic ribbons
Follow days,

Sleepy lakes
At misty dawns,
Knife like water
Thrown in storms,

Trembling mountains
Magical trees,
We grip there branches
In the breeze,

Darker days
Winter chills
Steaming kettles
On the sills,

Grassy chasms
Pierce the land
Great phantasms
Haunt the strand,

Shadowed garden
Picket fence
Summer
lets us sleep in tents,

Lying in the
Mountain shrouds
Tiredly tracing
Pathless clouds

Limestone caves
We brought the torch
And ran from nothing
Back to our porch,

Perfect nights
Full of laughs
In pure delight
At natures craft…

Copyright Â© zenith66 ... [ 2008-01-10 03:06:37]
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Re: Country days (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:16:26 AM AEST
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Damn zenith!! this was DEFINITELY nostalgic, and OH! so breath taking!!
Thank you for this. I was whisked away to the beauties of nature; breathing
it in, full and pure! Is anything more glorious than the excitement of being
outdoors, communing with all that we see, touch and smell?

You captured it perfectly, friend. A glorious read!!

~Breezy

Re: Country days (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 07:34:32 AM AEST
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Beautifully written
I love it without a doubt!!
God Bless!!

Re: Country days (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 11:06:05 AM AEST
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Hi Z,
I live in the country and wouldn't have it any other way. Course I have a house here.
Great writing.
big huggs, smiles, country days,
emy

Re: Country days (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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Yes i like this imencely, it touches one with it's vividness i can almost feel the damp and mist of the rain which i love to begin with, so
lovely a peice of writting, take care . . .

ty 4 your comment also . . .

Ben

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