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Array ( [sid] => 139643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hell Train [time] => 2008-01-07 15:12:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This train of pain stop’s at every
Train stop

Seeking all that want to step on
Board

You can buy a ticket or ride free

For he welcome one and he
Welcome all

Twisted faces cries out in a
Relentless cry

He welcome all and want you
All..

Screams of pain yell to the
Mountain tops

The pain clamps deeper with
With a eerie growl

He said let’s go for a ride

All Around the track and hence
Forth back again

Pain” O” pain run from me I
Swear I will be careful the
Next go round

Give me peace and free my
Body

From this painful drunken state
That locks me in bondage

For my eyes are blurry

My limbs is crackin”

So much pain for one to endure

The pain is cutting into my heart

It’s piercing through me like a
Sharp knife

Can’t you see my heart is losing
Blood

Drip, drip, drip my blood
Is Rushing and running on the
Floor

Please, Mr. Conductor stop this
Here train

All this blood is making me sick

Please

Let off, “O” let me off

No getting off for this train just enter
Into hell.. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 13 [informant] => honey56 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Hell Train

Contributed by honey56 on Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 03:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This train of pain stop’s at every
Train stop

Seeking all that want to step on
Board

You can buy a ticket or ride free

For he welcome one and he
Welcome all

Twisted faces cries out in a
Relentless cry

He welcome all and want you
All..

Screams of pain yell to the
Mountain tops

The pain clamps deeper with
With a eerie growl

He said let’s go for a ride

All Around the track and hence
Forth back again

Pain” O” pain run from me I
Swear I will be careful the
Next go round

Give me peace and free my
Body

From this painful drunken state
That locks me in bondage

For my eyes are blurry

My limbs is crackin”

So much pain for one to endure

The pain is cutting into my heart

It’s piercing through me like a
Sharp knife

Can’t you see my heart is losing
Blood

Drip, drip, drip my blood
Is Rushing and running on the
Floor

Please, Mr. Conductor stop this
Here train

All this blood is making me sick

Please

Let off, “O” let me off

No getting off for this train just enter
Into hell..

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2008-01-07 15:12:27]
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Re: Hell Train (User Rating: 1 )
by AKSHAY on Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 05:56:20 PM AEST
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woops...dats one depressing poem ( they call it "dark poetry" ) nowadays.....but wat do you actually want to say through this...what is this train all about ? where does it coem from ? who are seated into it ?

Re: Hell Train (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 12:11:19 AM AEST
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wow honey..thats pretty deep..sad almost...good write !

Re: Hell Train (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 09:07:12 AM AEST
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im not a big fan of dark poetry, but i liked the style of this one. it talked about a topic that has had too many poems written about it, which makes it too easy for any other write to about it to be unoriginal, but i think you did good with this one. i saw a bit of originality, and with the avoidance of cliches it could be every better.

nice job.

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