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Array ( [sid] => 139556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times [time] => 2008-01-03 10:28:47 [hometext] => not sure how well this poem reads coz wen i first wrote it, it was in a different order but thought this order made more sense..what do you think?? [bodytext] => I do not mean to scorn you,
But I did warn you.
I told you...
I love you...so many times...
Even in so many rhymes...
That you thought of as nothing more than silly lines.

Could I really settle for what was on offer?
Would it start to eat at me, become a bother?
I am not the kind of lady,
That could settle to be a wife with a baby.

You encouraged me to spread my wings,
Are you sure you are ready for what it brings?
I may grow without you,
Are you ready for that too?

You did not believe I would go,
Is that why it came as such a blow?
You finally realised what you had,
After being told so many times, you foolish lad.


DP

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Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times

Contributed by little_genna on Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I do not mean to scorn you,
But I did warn you.
I told you...
I love you...so many times...
Even in so many rhymes...
That you thought of as nothing more than silly lines.

Could I really settle for what was on offer?
Would it start to eat at me, become a bother?
I am not the kind of lady,
That could settle to be a wife with a baby.

You encouraged me to spread my wings,
Are you sure you are ready for what it brings?
I may grow without you,
Are you ready for that too?

You did not believe I would go,
Is that why it came as such a blow?
You finally realised what you had,
After being told so many times, you foolish lad.


DP





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Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 02:37:57 PM AEST
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I think it makes perfect sense and was well written.


Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:02:39 AM AEST
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Make perfect sense & A perfect write..
I enjoyed reading this..
Excellent!!


Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 01:21:23 AM AEST
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I may grow without you,
Are you ready for that too?

my favourite lines...sublime, coming of age poetry!

Cheers,
U.




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