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This corner of my life
A small dark speck is growing
Spreading like the night

As it grows so does a voice
A black voice its small at first, innocent
With dark tounges it wispers
A language I wish not to understand

But slowly it is revealed
Word by word I know what is said
And this voice did become my friend
It's thoughts realeased in my head

It was not only thoughts
The voice had a will
It was maligent
I cared not but for its quota to full

Many did pass by my hand
It was forced by the voice
The disembodyed master
With it I plead but to its will I have no choice

Once I had a life
Once I had a choice
But it left me that night
For salvation, my voice

Dimly I am aware
That what I do is wrong
But I am ordered by a higher power
This power made me strong

Others can try to change me
I dare you to try
But the voice wont lose its servant
By its will you'll die. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => anesthetic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

God of the mind

Contributed by anesthetic on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 10:49:21 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Alone here in my corner
This corner of my life
A small dark speck is growing
Spreading like the night

As it grows so does a voice
A black voice its small at first, innocent
With dark tounges it wispers
A language I wish not to understand

But slowly it is revealed
Word by word I know what is said
And this voice did become my friend
It's thoughts realeased in my head

It was not only thoughts
The voice had a will
It was maligent
I cared not but for its quota to full

Many did pass by my hand
It was forced by the voice
The disembodyed master
With it I plead but to its will I have no choice

Once I had a life
Once I had a choice
But it left me that night
For salvation, my voice

Dimly I am aware
That what I do is wrong
But I am ordered by a higher power
This power made me strong

Others can try to change me
I dare you to try
But the voice wont lose its servant
By its will you'll die.

Copyright © anesthetic ... [ 2008-01-02 10:49:21]
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Re: God of the mind (User Rating: 1 )
by kfghockeyfan on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 12:06:39 PM AEST
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Sure a little weird perhaps, but still brilliant throughout. Gets a rhyme scheme towards the end which gives it a good flow to end on. A very good read.

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