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Array ( [sid] => 139534 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time Has Grown Old [time] => 2008-01-02 08:52:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The new year has came in

But, all is the same

Nothing changes

Still the cheating, stealing,

Killing

Only a bit slicker!!

The graveyard still filled

With

All the broken hearted

Bones stack to the top

Pouring over the sides

Waiting to be mend

Hearing cries scream out

But silence said hush

Your screams will not be heard

All your skeletons just followed

You through the doors of 2008

The new year just begun but

Already It’s old..
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Time Has Grown Old

Contributed by honey56 on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 08:52:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The new year has came in

But, all is the same

Nothing changes

Still the cheating, stealing,

Killing

Only a bit slicker!!

The graveyard still filled

With

All the broken hearted

Bones stack to the top

Pouring over the sides

Waiting to be mend

Hearing cries scream out

But silence said hush

Your screams will not be heard

All your skeletons just followed

You through the doors of 2008

The new year just begun but

Already It’s old..

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2008-01-02 08:52:11]
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Re: Time Has Grown Old (User Rating: 1 )
by mr_alleycat on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 11:26:20 AM AEST
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I liked this alot. It speaks of so many things :)

Re: Time Has Grown Old (User Rating: 1 )
by kfghockeyfan on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 04:02:32 PM AEST
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Alittle bit deflating for anyone that parties at New Years. But of course it holds true. Truth throughout

Re: Time Has Grown Old (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:51:24 AM AEST
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its true in the most part for me and thats definitely how i felt about the last 2 years. but this year i made a big change... i moved sides of the world. leaving everything i know back in england... although some of my skeletons have tried to follow me... life is made easier by not having to answer a phone or an email... always have the excuse of ooopse time difference sorry i missed you ..

i really enjoyed the flow of this poem. but i'm not sure about this part

Pouring over the sides

Waiting to be mend

im not sure if that was just a spelling error but i felt that it kind of put a halt to your flow. i hope i havent offended you by saying that but wanted share an observation....however, i really loved this..great job!

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