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Array ( [sid] => 139499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I've Been Robbed [time] => 2007-12-31 16:25:54 [hometext] => This is a poem about a particular decision I made that I deeply regret. Ever made a decision that you couldnt change? [bodytext] => He took my soul from me, I let it slide cuz I thought it would be cool

But what I didn't realize was that he was playin' me for a fool

He came to me with a false promise, a lie

Now he holds my soul in the palm of his hands

I dont wanna be cast into the blackness when I die

I tried to get the other man to hear me but it seemed like I was being ignored

For three years I seeked him out

But I get I just couldn't find the Lord

So when HE came to me I was so desperate seeking for help

That when he asked for my soul I so blindly sold out myself

What the hell was I thinking? I dug myself in a hole way to deep to escape

I want my soul back you son of a *****!

But it's probably to late... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Ghost [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I've Been Robbed

Contributed by Ghost on Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 04:25:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He took my soul from me, I let it slide cuz I thought it would be cool

But what I didn't realize was that he was playin' me for a fool

He came to me with a false promise, a lie

Now he holds my soul in the palm of his hands

I dont wanna be cast into the blackness when I die

I tried to get the other man to hear me but it seemed like I was being ignored

For three years I seeked him out

But I get I just couldn't find the Lord

So when HE came to me I was so desperate seeking for help

That when he asked for my soul I so blindly sold out myself

What the hell was I thinking? I dug myself in a hole way to deep to escape

I want my soul back you son of a *****!

But it's probably to late...

Copyright © Ghost ... [ 2007-12-31 16:25:54]
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Re: I've Been Robbed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 05:46:04 PM AEST
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It's never too late and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
All god wants is for us to luv ourselves, him and each other.
He died on a cross to give us the right to mess up and then find for giveness, actually he jus wants us to accept his un dying luv and forgiveness.
huggs,
emy
Good writing.

Re: I've Been Robbed (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 1st January 2008 @ 12:58:15 AM AEST
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God loves us no matter what we do...He understands, and one day u will too

ki

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