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Array ( [sid] => 139476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moon's Pain [time] => 2007-12-30 13:21:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The moon is weeping, sobbing, crying
Few notice the tears that fall from her
Few care to look up to see her in such anguish

The moon is above us and tears are falling down with the angel’s tears (see the Storm), since the moon is up above, why don’t people hold out their hands and catch them so that they are not wasted and be trampled on shoes of people who just don’t care about her or anyone else.

Why is the moon sobbing?
She is in Pain.
Pain from craters, holes, and Man’s footprints.

The Pain that causes her the most is Man’s footprints
Those cursed footprints have been tainted and stained the surface and will never leave unless a breath from Mother Earth will blow them away and never return. Will Mother Earth blow away the cursed footprints that Man has left behind?
Will she?
No one knows but Mother Earth.
One day, Mother Earth will blow them away and when she does, everything will change.
She would stop crying over the footprints that Man has left behind.
But she will still cry about the Pain she has, she will cry even harder when some people don’t look up or even to try to catch her tears that are falling unto the ground below.

One day, Man will care and will stop and hold out their hand and catch one of her tears that fell from her face and have fallen unto the Earth.
One day, the footprints will be gone and everything will be all right.
One day, the moon will stop crying and rejoice because Man has finally noticed her once again and have finally held out their hands to catch her tears that has fallen from up above. Once they are caught, they are not cool but are warm to the touch.

This warmness wants to spread, spread where people don’t want that warmness to be. People hide so that they don’t have to feel it.
The tears are the cure.
They run, they hide, they go indoors so that they won’t get wet or cured.
These tears won’t go away, they have help. Help from the wind, the wind blows the moon’s tears inside but these tears are special, they’re not wet but they are dry and they won’t cause any kind of damage.

The moon is no longer crying but smiling instead, smiling so much that she is beginning to cry once again. Only these tears aren’t from the footprints that Man has left behind but of Man because Man has finally caught a single tear and have finally held the tear up to their cheek and finally looked up and have finally noticed her once again. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bresettem [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Moon's Pain

Contributed by bresettem on Sunday, 30th December 2007 @ 01:21:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The moon is weeping, sobbing, crying
Few notice the tears that fall from her
Few care to look up to see her in such anguish

The moon is above us and tears are falling down with the angel’s tears (see the Storm), since the moon is up above, why don’t people hold out their hands and catch them so that they are not wasted and be trampled on shoes of people who just don’t care about her or anyone else.

Why is the moon sobbing?
She is in Pain.
Pain from craters, holes, and Man’s footprints.

The Pain that causes her the most is Man’s footprints
Those cursed footprints have been tainted and stained the surface and will never leave unless a breath from Mother Earth will blow them away and never return. Will Mother Earth blow away the cursed footprints that Man has left behind?
Will she?
No one knows but Mother Earth.
One day, Mother Earth will blow them away and when she does, everything will change.
She would stop crying over the footprints that Man has left behind.
But she will still cry about the Pain she has, she will cry even harder when some people don’t look up or even to try to catch her tears that are falling unto the ground below.

One day, Man will care and will stop and hold out their hand and catch one of her tears that fell from her face and have fallen unto the Earth.
One day, the footprints will be gone and everything will be all right.
One day, the moon will stop crying and rejoice because Man has finally noticed her once again and have finally held out their hands to catch her tears that has fallen from up above. Once they are caught, they are not cool but are warm to the touch.

This warmness wants to spread, spread where people don’t want that warmness to be. People hide so that they don’t have to feel it.
The tears are the cure.
They run, they hide, they go indoors so that they won’t get wet or cured.
These tears won’t go away, they have help. Help from the wind, the wind blows the moon’s tears inside but these tears are special, they’re not wet but they are dry and they won’t cause any kind of damage.

The moon is no longer crying but smiling instead, smiling so much that she is beginning to cry once again. Only these tears aren’t from the footprints that Man has left behind but of Man because Man has finally caught a single tear and have finally held the tear up to their cheek and finally looked up and have finally noticed her once again.




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