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Array ( [sid] => 139418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bitter [time] => 2007-12-27 04:45:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When I looked into your eyes,
you turned your head and looked away,
telling me that I'm always bitter
when you never looked at me when I smiled
and when I tried to hold your hand
- you yanked it away
and times I could see you
you made excuses to get away...

And you still say I'm bitter
and still I'm not surprised
and neither are you
when I turn my head
and look the other way.

As music plays
just like the rhythm of life;
with the beat of love and
the screams of hate,
silence of depression
and the sadness when it ends.

Pain that turns numb
and anger that succumbs
to a few words that merely express
the mess that all have become.

When the time comes,
it will leave like Autumn
and the hope will cling
like babies to mothers...
for a better tomorrow!

Chances are wasted
like a genius locked in a small room,
to never experience everything that
life could be,

but not for long will I be,
I'm not bitter anymore,
you see. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Kellros [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Bitter

Contributed by Kellros on Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 04:45:49 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

When I looked into your eyes,
you turned your head and looked away,
telling me that I'm always bitter
when you never looked at me when I smiled
and when I tried to hold your hand
- you yanked it away
and times I could see you
you made excuses to get away...

And you still say I'm bitter
and still I'm not surprised
and neither are you
when I turn my head
and look the other way.

As music plays
just like the rhythm of life;
with the beat of love and
the screams of hate,
silence of depression
and the sadness when it ends.

Pain that turns numb
and anger that succumbs
to a few words that merely express
the mess that all have become.

When the time comes,
it will leave like Autumn
and the hope will cling
like babies to mothers...
for a better tomorrow!

Chances are wasted
like a genius locked in a small room,
to never experience everything that
life could be,

but not for long will I be,
I'm not bitter anymore,
you see.

Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2007-12-27 04:45:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 06:17:01 AM AEST
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I totally relate to this write. This is often how the relationship ends, and I have been there too many times. I like your choice of words, and though the ending was a little strange, overall I really liked it. Good write!

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