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Array ( [sid] => 139364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deranged Insanity [time] => 2007-12-24 04:08:48 [hometext] => Figures of judgement presume to judge me but who is really being judged [bodytext] => Deranged Insanity

Build me up, break me down
Burn me alive, watch me drown
Across the plane of space and time
Hunted, like an animal
Holy man what words do you bring
Of salvation and refuge
Do you proclaim Liberation
A liberation of the physical form
To transcend, to become angels
Or are you no more then a false prophet
A harbinger of evil will,
Heralding damnation and corruption
Will i be forsaken to the hunters
Or is there yet chance for this sinner
Weak & humbled, carless & disgraced
Maybe it is not yet too late
On you knees holy man
beseech your divine god
Beg for his forgiveness
Repent, sinner... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Immortal-Dragon21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Deranged Insanity

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 04:08:48 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Deranged Insanity

Build me up, break me down
Burn me alive, watch me drown
Across the plane of space and time
Hunted, like an animal
Holy man what words do you bring
Of salvation and refuge
Do you proclaim Liberation
A liberation of the physical form
To transcend, to become angels
Or are you no more then a false prophet
A harbinger of evil will,
Heralding damnation and corruption
Will i be forsaken to the hunters
Or is there yet chance for this sinner
Weak & humbled, carless & disgraced
Maybe it is not yet too late
On you knees holy man
beseech your divine god
Beg for his forgiveness
Repent, sinner...

Copyright © Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2007-12-24 04:08:48]
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Re: Deranged Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by conorshawn on Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 08:12:16 AM AEST
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we all can be a little derranged when it comes to the politics of religion.

Re: Deranged Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 04:15:10 PM AEST
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i love this..words u have be able to say that i havn't been able to...love it

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