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Array ( [sid] => 139342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Miss Nothing [time] => 2007-12-22 23:52:46 [hometext] => It is up to you what you think Miss Nothing is about. I'd like to hear your feedback and interpretation of the meaning. [bodytext] => Credit all but nothing. Nothing knows you.
Nothing knows where to start. And when.
She knows how to light the match to the fuse,
Igniting the flame: the longing for.....nothing.
All for the sake of longing.

Love all but nothing. Nothing begs for your love.
Nothing knows the power of seduction. And uses it.
She knows how to win your affection whilst killing you.
She draws you inside: the pleasure of.....nothing.
All for the sake of pleasure.

You married her, Mr nothing. King nothing.
But can you feel it-
The cliff edge beneath your heels?

Or do you just feel.....nothing? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 329 [topic] => 64 [informant] => the-deepend [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Miss Nothing

Contributed by the-deepend on Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 11:52:46 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Credit all but nothing. Nothing knows you.
Nothing knows where to start. And when.
She knows how to light the match to the fuse,
Igniting the flame: the longing for.....nothing.
All for the sake of longing.

Love all but nothing. Nothing begs for your love.
Nothing knows the power of seduction. And uses it.
She knows how to win your affection whilst killing you.
She draws you inside: the pleasure of.....nothing.
All for the sake of pleasure.

You married her, Mr nothing. King nothing.
But can you feel it-
The cliff edge beneath your heels?

Or do you just feel.....nothing?

Copyright © the-deepend ... [ 2007-12-22 23:52:46]
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Re: Miss Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 02:27:07 AM AEST
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Very nice post!!

Re: Miss Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnYamrus on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:05:11 AM AEST
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this isn't bad at all! going into it, i thought it was going to feel contrived and forced, but it didn't. not at all.
nicely done.
yamrus

Re: Miss Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 04:37:55 AM AEST
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Confusing this can be It seems to be very emotional and a cry for Love-Love Me Tender Love Me True-.To suduce or even show any-Sweet Emotion-The woman has to make up her mind to futher this issue or the the problem could reoccure whatever the termoil of love and undecidedally(sp?)the other significant may want just as much.Very good write brought back memories on a personal level.Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest,Denver L. Jr. Merry X-Mas &Happy New Year 2007-2008.

Re: Miss Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 04:41:19 AM AEST
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Light My Fire,Burning Beds-its up to one to light the canle wick to persue warmth.nice poem Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest,Denver L. Jr. Mery X-Mas&Happy New Year2008-2007

Re: Miss Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 05:28:39 AM AEST
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Being alone no matter who surrounds you.
Maybe cut out the periods and leave it one sentence. Like when you say: Nothing knows where to start. And when.

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