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with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this all backs up will u feed urself

u've washed ur hands and i know
these half smiles are my way of saying goodbye
and i know ur the first when no one's on my side
yes and i know, ur the last to say goodnight

these words are waking and between each hour
dark sentimental u say u dig my gifts ah yes
when this breaks down keep me in ur mind
keep it covered no one kills stories like these

i've got mothers intuition and my own backbone
with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this day backs up will u feed urself [comments] => 4 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 48 [informant] => apartment213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

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Contributed by apartment213 on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i've got mothers intuition and my own backbone
with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this all backs up will u feed urself

u've washed ur hands and i know
these half smiles are my way of saying goodbye
and i know ur the first when no one's on my side
yes and i know, ur the last to say goodnight

these words are waking and between each hour
dark sentimental u say u dig my gifts ah yes
when this breaks down keep me in ur mind
keep it covered no one kills stories like these

i've got mothers intuition and my own backbone
with welcome inuendo i'm feeling warm and u know
all things aside can u breathe all things'll die can u breathe
when this day backs up will u feed urself

Copyright © apartment213 ... [ 2003-03-08 06:30:00]
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Re: none (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 09:42:10 AM AEST
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This is great.!! I love every verse...Its such a sad and unbreathing chorus of moments....to feel this way.and you have expressed yourself well.

Re: none (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:41:43 AM AEST
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i can hear this playing... beautifully sad...

Re: none (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:39:29 AM AEST
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tell her how you feel :O) and good luck kenny
i love it! as always

Lindsey

Re: none (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:14:29 AM AEST
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this one left me speechless, but i promised i would comment. i loved the work. so thought provoking.

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