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Array ( [sid] => 13930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Still This Emptiness Remains In Me [time] => 2003-03-08 05:30:00 [hometext] => Hello! Please read my poem lol. I wrote this because of some emotional strain happening lately..hm.. Yeah pretty lonely :( NEWAYS i juz wanted to express my feelings >D thx luv ya, L.L [bodytext] => I walked out in the darkness
Surrounded by the cold
Feeling that something was missing
Feeling all alone
My life was here beside me
I had everything I wanted, everything I needed
but still there remained an empty space in me
I walked across a distance
Leaving my thoughts behind
While traces of memories
Swept through my mind
I thought about the things I've said to you
And all the things I've done
All the things I've wanted to
All the things I've left behind
I burried you so deep in my heart
Not planning to make an effort for a new start
But something made me think of you
Something so true
I finally realized I was never in your heart
So what is love if we're two worlds apart?
Even if we were apart, have i ever been in your heart?
I thought and thought endlessly through
Well maybe it's true
You never loved me
You never will
So what is the point for loving you still?
I told you how much I loved you
Even told you all the things i would do,
You never really paid attention
You treated my words like they were broken lies
All you ever gave me, was a simple meaningless sigh
I thought I could convince you or make you say
I love you
But it never happened and it won't anyway
Even if you did?
What would you say?
If I asked you would you die for me today?
I don't know why I came all this way
When just today, I realized it had never came my way
I really loved you
but now a heart of emptiness remains in me
Life was like this
I knew that it was the way it would be
but I didn't want to understand, I didn't want to see
All I really wanted was for you to love me
Nothing really mattered
Until I realized
That love doesn't last, it eventually dies
Forever and ever this emptiness remains in me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => orangeman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Still This Emptiness Remains In Me

Contributed by orangeman on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I walked out in the darkness
Surrounded by the cold
Feeling that something was missing
Feeling all alone
My life was here beside me
I had everything I wanted, everything I needed
but still there remained an empty space in me
I walked across a distance
Leaving my thoughts behind
While traces of memories
Swept through my mind
I thought about the things I've said to you
And all the things I've done
All the things I've wanted to
All the things I've left behind
I burried you so deep in my heart
Not planning to make an effort for a new start
But something made me think of you
Something so true
I finally realized I was never in your heart
So what is love if we're two worlds apart?
Even if we were apart, have i ever been in your heart?
I thought and thought endlessly through
Well maybe it's true
You never loved me
You never will
So what is the point for loving you still?
I told you how much I loved you
Even told you all the things i would do,
You never really paid attention
You treated my words like they were broken lies
All you ever gave me, was a simple meaningless sigh
I thought I could convince you or make you say
I love you
But it never happened and it won't anyway
Even if you did?
What would you say?
If I asked you would you die for me today?
I don't know why I came all this way
When just today, I realized it had never came my way
I really loved you
but now a heart of emptiness remains in me
Life was like this
I knew that it was the way it would be
but I didn't want to understand, I didn't want to see
All I really wanted was for you to love me
Nothing really mattered
Until I realized
That love doesn't last, it eventually dies
Forever and ever this emptiness remains in me.




Copyright © orangeman ... [ 2003-03-08 05:30:00]
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Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Gribba on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:45:29 AM AEST
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I just want to say... that I like this poem alot... and I am only 2 familiar with this feeling!
Thank you for sharing it!


Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:15:39 PM AEST
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Bits and pieces of this I can really relate to. Great write!

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:49:08 AM AEST
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very passionate... i especially love the beginning... blessings...


Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 10:38:29 PM AEST
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Loved it


Re: Still This Emptiness Remains In Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 01:28:36 AM AEST
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Sparkle.....I still can't believe your age!! You are very talented... I love this one also..
Hugs
Jenni




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