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Darkness Leave Me Alone
Contributed by
candysears
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Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:38:10 AM in AEST
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Darkness has shown his head leaving
Me lonely
And alone
My pride held me back in the day
I know all those times is just a memory
In my mine
Suspended in time
As I travel down a field of pink and
White clovers
Left here to find my way over
The tracks of time...
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2007-12-19 11:38:10]
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Re: Darkness Leave Me Alone
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 12:01:49 PM AEST
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Well you certainly have crafted the words together nicely into this piece.The flow is great and a lovely compelling read
Thx for sharing
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Re: Darkness Leave Me Alone
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 01:53:15 PM AEST
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candysears,
This is a heartrending expression; one the majority of poets have experieced at one time or another. This sense of isolation is a bummer; a bloodsucking, life-sucking, drain of our ability to hope and dream. You did a fine job selecting just the right words; not cluttering it up with pretentious expression. I could respond with a book, but will simply say, all us poets have been there, and most of us still are.
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Re: Darkness Leave Me Alone
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by conorshawn on
Thursday, 20th December 2007 @ 03:07:22 AM AEST
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| good write i was following you down the path as i read it. |
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