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What Became of Me ?

Contributed by puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 10:51:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



In this haven, this four walled dwelling, I begin to dwell
Thoughts reach back, unlock rooms of the past
Running down the halls of memory, chasing time lapsed
Wandering through wondering, revisiting old ghosts

Where are you now my first sweetheart, naive love I gave eternally
Tentative first kiss forever preserved in capsule of thought
Once each needed each like the air that we breathe
Now everything but image lost, to strange subconscious sleep

Cast further back to purest days, those long hot summers of innocence
Tainted not by burdens or realities of life
Pacts laid down, a friendship bond so resolute and true
Life willed us on a different course, she spirited you away

The old school playground filled with voice, a mirror takes me there
Am I the one with the trusting eyes, are you the one with glowing smile
I sit for a moment, pondering, the faces I see and saw
Where once existence intertwined, now scattered seeds remain

Another day fades into dust and silence leads the night
I pray that those who are here and now will not melt into yesterday
In all the minds of these who are memories now, do I exist ?
The question I cannot ask or answer, what became of me ?




Copyright © puppy_dog_eyes ... [ 2007-12-19 10:51:39]
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Re: What Became of Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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Very beautiful write!

This time of year gets you every time..

Happy Holidays To You & Yours


Re: What Became of Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 10:45:51 AM AEST
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Hello there friend,
I'm so far behind on my reading and commenting. Please forgive me.
Hey, We made it thru December,
Sad write but written like a professional.
Big huggs, Late, Happy, happy, holidays,
emy
sorry so late getting back to you so late. I'll try to do better.


Re: What Became of Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by MemeCaroline on Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 10:16:46 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem. Very passionate and thought provoking.


Re: What Became of Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Thursday, 31st January 2008 @ 12:38:42 AM AEST
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Dear Sweetheart,
you are still you and will always be.
Your wonderful eyes, kind smiles
and loving heart.
Very lovely poetry you put in here...:)
And big sorries for the disconnection :(

With love forever,Aika




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