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Array ( [sid] => 13926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Darkest day [time] => 2003-03-08 03:30:00 [hometext] => die die die.. [bodytext] => Lately my life has its ups and downs
I feel like im just going round and round.
I think about it every night
Even when we fight
I look at the knife or toy with the gun
you take it away, no fun.
You think you can tell me what to do where to go
Like im some ho
Why does my life have to be this way
Is it because I'm gay? or have no Say?
Sometimes I feel like im running out of words to say
and then you act like im in the way
I think every day and night
because i dont want to fight
or live this way
because im gay
I just want to die
or fly away into the heavenly sky
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Darkest day

Contributed by inad on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Lately my life has its ups and downs
I feel like im just going round and round.
I think about it every night
Even when we fight
I look at the knife or toy with the gun
you take it away, no fun.
You think you can tell me what to do where to go
Like im some ho
Why does my life have to be this way
Is it because I'm gay? or have no Say?
Sometimes I feel like im running out of words to say
and then you act like im in the way
I think every day and night
because i dont want to fight
or live this way
because im gay
I just want to die
or fly away into the heavenly sky

Copyright © inad ... [ 2003-03-08 03:30:00]
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Re: Darkest day (User Rating: 1 )
by Gribba on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
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This poem... WOW....
it's like I was listening to my brother.
Not long ago he was saying this same thing, not in a poem but... ohhh...
wow...

This is a great poem and full with emotions!!
and it floads so well when reading it.

Re: Darkest day (User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:47:27 AM AEST
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ummm... its very different...

Re: Darkest day (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 09:57:53 PM AEST
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i think this is beautiful, i love how you laid it out too, huggs and love to you, always nessa
some sunny *smiles* too:)

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