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Array ( [sid] => 139251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => dear Anita; [time] => 2007-12-18 00:03:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => dear anita;

the most recent poem
you sent
is one of the best things
you’ve ever written.

it’s got heart and soul,
intelligence,
warmth and wit.

it’s got
everything
my poetry seems to lack.

please
don’t write to me again.

i don’t need to be
constantly reminded
that at times my poetry
is worthless and pedestrian…

that my subject matter is limited.

in fact,
your poem crosses over
onto my side of the street
and you’ve done it
so much better than me,

limiting my subject matter
even more.

i don’t need
the competition.

if you write to me again
i’ll refuse to open your letter.

i’m taking your books
down off my shelf
and throwing them out.

from here on in
i’m only going to read
writers who have been dead
40 years or more.

at least with them
i’ll have
a fighting chance.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => JohnYamrus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

dear Anita;

Contributed by JohnYamrus on Tuesday, 18th December 2007 @ 12:03:20 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

dear anita;

the most recent poem
you sent
is one of the best things
you’ve ever written.

it’s got heart and soul,
intelligence,
warmth and wit.

it’s got
everything
my poetry seems to lack.

please
don’t write to me again.

i don’t need to be
constantly reminded
that at times my poetry
is worthless and pedestrian…

that my subject matter is limited.

in fact,
your poem crosses over
onto my side of the street
and you’ve done it
so much better than me,

limiting my subject matter
even more.

i don’t need
the competition.

if you write to me again
i’ll refuse to open your letter.

i’m taking your books
down off my shelf
and throwing them out.

from here on in
i’m only going to read
writers who have been dead
40 years or more.

at least with them
i’ll have
a fighting chance.

Copyright Â© JohnYamrus ... [ 2007-12-18 00:03:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: dear Anita; (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 11:03:36 AM AEST
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I guess that's what you call a "profound influence" on someone.
I've always thought the main thing about writing is the sense of achievement, for me it is anyway.It's nice when people make good comments about it but if we have to have our ego's stroked all the time it's missing the point.
That said, nice work

Steve

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