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Welcome to hell
would you like to come in?
Step over the threshold
and let the journey begin

The first thing you do
is take a step back
Because hell makes no sense
and guidance is slack

So you wander around
in a place filled with screams
From the terror that finds it's way
into your dreams

There is no escape
from this place,you know
You can fight all you want
but hell won't let go

You'll look for a light
but find that there's none
And you can never undo
the damage you've done

So you sell your soul
in exchange for a deal
But in hell, deals break
and there is no appeal

The peace you were promised
never enters your mind
And the end to your nightmares
you're never to find

If this sounds like a place
that you'd like to be
Take hold of my hand
and come there with me

But first, I must warn you
of that which you'll lose
So listen carefully
before you choose

Your soul is the first thing to go
then your heart
And your sanity then
from you will depart

Then you're lost and you're lonely
not knowing your needs
And it's from this confusion
that pure evil feeds

So you sink even lower
inside of this place
And you put on a mask
to cover your face

So that nobody knows
the pain that you hide
And nobody knows
the place you reside

And this I can tell you
with certainty
Your soul will be lost
for eternity
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Welcome to hell

Contributed by black-reaper on Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:05:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Welcome to hell
Welcome to hell
would you like to come in?
Step over the threshold
and let the journey begin

The first thing you do
is take a step back
Because hell makes no sense
and guidance is slack

So you wander around
in a place filled with screams
From the terror that finds it's way
into your dreams

There is no escape
from this place,you know
You can fight all you want
but hell won't let go

You'll look for a light
but find that there's none
And you can never undo
the damage you've done

So you sell your soul
in exchange for a deal
But in hell, deals break
and there is no appeal

The peace you were promised
never enters your mind
And the end to your nightmares
you're never to find

If this sounds like a place
that you'd like to be
Take hold of my hand
and come there with me

But first, I must warn you
of that which you'll lose
So listen carefully
before you choose

Your soul is the first thing to go
then your heart
And your sanity then
from you will depart

Then you're lost and you're lonely
not knowing your needs
And it's from this confusion
that pure evil feeds

So you sink even lower
inside of this place
And you put on a mask
to cover your face

So that nobody knows
the pain that you hide
And nobody knows
the place you reside

And this I can tell you
with certainty
Your soul will be lost
for eternity

Copyright © black-reaper ... [ 2007-12-15 13:05:56]
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Re: Welcome to hell (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:41:54 PM AEST
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No thanks.
good writing tho.
huggs,
emy

Re: Welcome to hell (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Sunday, 16th December 2007 @ 08:38:43 AM AEST
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Awesome piece
You have great talent
Keep on writing
n thanks for sharing ur work
with us all
Best wishes
Bluestars

Re: Welcome to hell (User Rating: 1 )
by blackrose233 on Friday, 21st December 2007 @ 06:51:10 AM AEST
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so true I love it and it flows good

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