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Array ( [sid] => 139170 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My World [time] => 2007-12-14 11:43:52 [hometext] => On a day I am down, i do not give a frown but i grab a pen and write things down! [bodytext] => in my world there are monsters
in my world people make people cry
in my world someone would judge someone else without even looking them in the eye
in my world people can not fly
in my world people don't care to try
in my world there are people who live eating hate and their outcomes look to terrify
in my world people choose to be ignorant to their surroundings and what they can learn
they are oblivious and would rather get a kiss than have anything in their concern
in my world people live like sharks almost blind but their ambitions are atavistic
when possibilities are endless they lie in their beds filling up on pain and become more sick
in my world everybody needs help and they will be ready when its time to recieve
but its hard to believe that when you take a look that everyone you know will just decieve
pain clouds the hearts of the innocent those who are meek are taken for being weak
but darkness clouds the minds of the evil who succeed to achieve what they seek
my world is sick but it feels it is healthy
and the power is given to those who are wealthy
a place where mothers turn backs on their own children and the hope to proceed always seems to wear thin
in my world it is always cold so cold that when winter comes we cannot tell
if i didn't know any better i wouldn't have come here to this place that i now call hell
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In My World

Contributed by beefybeebuzz on Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 11:43:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



in my world there are monsters
in my world people make people cry
in my world someone would judge someone else without even looking them in the eye
in my world people can not fly
in my world people don't care to try
in my world there are people who live eating hate and their outcomes look to terrify
in my world people choose to be ignorant to their surroundings and what they can learn
they are oblivious and would rather get a kiss than have anything in their concern
in my world people live like sharks almost blind but their ambitions are atavistic
when possibilities are endless they lie in their beds filling up on pain and become more sick
in my world everybody needs help and they will be ready when its time to recieve
but its hard to believe that when you take a look that everyone you know will just decieve
pain clouds the hearts of the innocent those who are meek are taken for being weak
but darkness clouds the minds of the evil who succeed to achieve what they seek
my world is sick but it feels it is healthy
and the power is given to those who are wealthy
a place where mothers turn backs on their own children and the hope to proceed always seems to wear thin
in my world it is always cold so cold that when winter comes we cannot tell
if i didn't know any better i wouldn't have come here to this place that i now call hell




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Re: In My World (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Friday, 14th December 2007 @ 06:42:53 PM AEST
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Love it!
Sounds to me that you and me
share this same world
How refreshing
Best wishes
*Bluestars*


Re: In My World (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_poet on Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:06:02 PM AEST
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this is so true, people and the world we live in are changing and its not for the better but worse. keep up the great work




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