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Array ( [sid] => 139112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Womb [time] => 2007-12-11 02:24:53 [hometext] => This poem is about my miscarriage on December 1st, 2007. This was my first pregnancy and I am very heart broken. I dedicate this poem to Melody Angel Schefer-- our baby girl. Mommy and Daddy love you! [bodytext] => What can I say
God what can I do
Please keep our baby forever next to you
All of my hurt and all of my fears
Are now coming out in a million different tears
My heart is weeping
My spirit; needing
My body feels as if it were screaming
Just one look
Only one touch
You're our baby girl and we love you so much
I now feel empty
So barren inside
This is a feeling I wish I could hide
Was it my fault
God what did I do
Why did my womb have to be our baby's tomb [comments] => 3 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 39 [informant] => 6whiteRoses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

My Womb

Contributed by 6whiteRoses on Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 02:24:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

What can I say
God what can I do
Please keep our baby forever next to you
All of my hurt and all of my fears
Are now coming out in a million different tears
My heart is weeping
My spirit; needing
My body feels as if it were screaming
Just one look
Only one touch
You're our baby girl and we love you so much
I now feel empty
So barren inside
This is a feeling I wish I could hide
Was it my fault
God what did I do
Why did my womb have to be our baby's tomb

Copyright © 6whiteRoses ... [ 2007-12-11 02:24:53]
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Re: My Womb (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Tuesday, 11th December 2007 @ 02:53:18 PM AEST
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My sincere sympathy for your loss...May God grant you comfort...Russ

In the angels choir tonight
There's a brand new Melody
To mom and dad she sings
In voice most heavenly

"Though hollow the womb"
"Full will be your heart"
"For I am always with you"
"We'll never be apart"

"I'm here with the angels"
"They're taking good care of me"
"Until the day we meet"
"And in your arms I'll be"

"Until then I'm a guardian angel"
"Oh yes mommy and daddy it's true"
"And you know what else?"
"I'm watching over you!"

Re: My Womb (User Rating: 1 )
by TeamJK on Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 07:52:36 AM AEST
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Oh my God!! This is so heart-breaking! I am terribly sorry for your loss and I know that it will take a very long time to you to heal...if ever.
But be strong and know that she will live forever with the angels.
From one who shares your pain.....

Jenni

P/S Lovely poem from Russ (Loner) He wrote a beautiful one for me about 4 years ago....which I still listen to.

Re: My Womb (User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 05:13:27 AM AEST
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Thank you both for your comments. I appreciate them both, and I connot thank you enough.

~God Bless~

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