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You killed my dream
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Your eyes like chains.
Your mouth like poison.
Here I am, now you have
disarmed me.
Naked,undressed
of my thoughts.
Here it is, now you have killed
my dream.
You have killed it
but it still lives inside me,
its fragile flame
is the weakness
of my look,
of my words,
in front of you
that change everything,
that upset everything,
that turn me upside down.
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LostDream
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2003-03-07 20:20:00]
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Re: You killed my dream
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by mckayla on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:02:10 PM AEST
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Very sad. Great write!!
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Re: You killed my dream
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by live_to_love on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 09:37:19 PM AEST
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| very nice:) keep up the good work |
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