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Array ( [sid] => 13887 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Goodnight Clayton... [time] => 2003-03-07 09:30:00 [hometext] => For you my darling Clayton...Wherever you may be... [bodytext] => While all the tears are falling,still I hold my breath
For I thought I'd feel you always,even in your death
But I sit with shattered heart and a mind of memories
Wondering why it is,that I can't feel you here with me

Could it be I wonder,that I'm denying you are gone
Could my sanity be fading,as I wander all alone
Kindred is for always,no matter where we are
And I've always felt your presence,even from afar

So why am I so adamant to believe or not believe
For a fleeting moment I hope,then cry,and how I grieve
Last night I took a walk,in the rain along the beach
And stood upon the point as the waves crashed at my feet

I looked up to the sky and with the rain upon my tears
Found myself again,wishing you were here.....
I spoke to you in whispers,told again of my love
And still I didn't feel you,no sign from up above

All around was silent,and as I fell down on my knees
I kissed our poems one by one,then gave them to the sea
For I knew if you had really left,gone forever more
You would hold our words one day, on a brighter distant shore

"Goodnight my darling Clayton" I whispered through my tears
And as I placed my hand to heart,I knew I'd always feel you here [comments] => 2 [counter] => 559 [topic] => 39 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Goodnight Clayton...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



While all the tears are falling,still I hold my breath
For I thought I'd feel you always,even in your death
But I sit with shattered heart and a mind of memories
Wondering why it is,that I can't feel you here with me

Could it be I wonder,that I'm denying you are gone
Could my sanity be fading,as I wander all alone
Kindred is for always,no matter where we are
And I've always felt your presence,even from afar

So why am I so adamant to believe or not believe
For a fleeting moment I hope,then cry,and how I grieve
Last night I took a walk,in the rain along the beach
And stood upon the point as the waves crashed at my feet

I looked up to the sky and with the rain upon my tears
Found myself again,wishing you were here.....
I spoke to you in whispers,told again of my love
And still I didn't feel you,no sign from up above

All around was silent,and as I fell down on my knees
I kissed our poems one by one,then gave them to the sea
For I knew if you had really left,gone forever more
You would hold our words one day, on a brighter distant shore

"Goodnight my darling Clayton" I whispered through my tears
And as I placed my hand to heart,I knew I'd always feel you here




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-03-07 09:30:00]
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Re: Goodnight Clayton... (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 07:03:30 PM AEST
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so sorry for your sadness.....
rosie


Re: Goodnight Clayton... (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:20:16 AM AEST
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big hug, i have some idea of what this man meant to you from visitng your home page, big hug, so sorry for you, as we say in ireland




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