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[sid] => 138865
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You Fall
[time] => 2007-11-29 10:47:10
[hometext] => I had to write a poem for English class. I came up with this. Let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => It trips you and you fall A harsh smack You lose it all. By the time they hear your yelp It's too late, you're beyond help. You lay in a morgue, stone cold Your mother won't even look at you, That'd be too bold. Closed casket, a rip in your head. They lay you down, a wooden bed. All alone, you wish to fly Hoping God will hear you cry. Left to rot, you've lost it all, At Death's command, you fall. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 353 [topic] => 13 [informant] => flamingblade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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