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In the Sea
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 05:14:01 PM in AEST
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Tonight would be a good night to drown my sorrows but I don't have any alcohol, so Ill just have to wade with them.
When the sorrow fades into black and the pain lights up the sea, there is nothing I can do but watch in horror.
Love will often come, with a rescue boat, then I watch it fade away and realize it was just a cruel joke.
Now I just float in my sea of hate and wait for the sea to turn red.
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Re: In the Sea
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 10:30:24 AM AEST (User
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wow. this is...deep.
beautiful.
dark, but not really creepy like some dark poems are. i like the line about love...that was pretty cool.
short and sweet, but you still get your point across.
i very much like this =]
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