|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Should I Die or Shoud I Stay
Contributed by
TooPhat
on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:30:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
Should I die or should I stay
This is a question I ask myself everyday,
To face the world or just fall down?
The answer to this question I cannot say I have found,
I feel lost without a friend,
One person on whom I can depend,
I feel separated from the world, surrounded by a brick wall,
Alone, all by myself, finding myself with nobody to call,
The pressures of this world are just getting to me,
And the beauty of everything I find myself not being able to see,
I feel like nobody understands me and I've been placed here all alone.
With my head made of foolish nonsense and my heart made of stone,
Why is it everyone else feels love and emotions and me not a single thing?
I find it quite unfair, the only emotion I feel is hate and it is all towards me,
I hate to end this poem too harsh and dry
But not having any good things to say I might as well just say goodbye.
Copyright ©
TooPhat
... [
2007-11-27 10:30:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Should I Die or Shoud I Stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Very good write. Thank you for sharing. |
|
|
Re: Should I Die or Shoud I Stay
(User Rating: 1 )
by conorshawn on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:43:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
my friend you dont ride this boat alone, there are many of us out here with the majority being poets who fill these shoes.
we were put here for a reason. good stuff my friend. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
