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I’ll show you what it’s like when you lose all control.

I’ll show you what the edge of this blade does for me,
I’ll show you what it takes for me to feel free.

Quickly slide down with me on this spiral to hell,
I’ll show you just how this angel fell.

Pain and hatred turned these wings from silver to black,
I’ll show you the point where I couldn’t turn back.

It wasn’t long ago that I crawled into this bong,
I’ll show you how it feels to never belong.

Stuck in my prison of total darkness,
I’ll show you my loneliness.

Everyday I walk around with this plastic grin,
I’ll show you there’s no release like sin.

Maybe I’m just too far lost to even be saved,
I’ll show you someone disgustingly depraved.

You see, when the pain is too much, I have this devise;
I’ll show you how it stops with just the first little slice.

I’ll just drag this blade across each of my wrists,
I’ll show you my scars where the pain persists.

A dark and gruesome release into ecstasy,
I’ll show you how death became my fantasy.
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I'll Show You

Contributed by Shadows_In_The_Darkness on Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 06:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Let me bring you down into the dark depths of my soul,
I’ll show you what it’s like when you lose all control.

I’ll show you what the edge of this blade does for me,
I’ll show you what it takes for me to feel free.

Quickly slide down with me on this spiral to hell,
I’ll show you just how this angel fell.

Pain and hatred turned these wings from silver to black,
I’ll show you the point where I couldn’t turn back.

It wasn’t long ago that I crawled into this bong,
I’ll show you how it feels to never belong.

Stuck in my prison of total darkness,
I’ll show you my loneliness.

Everyday I walk around with this plastic grin,
I’ll show you there’s no release like sin.

Maybe I’m just too far lost to even be saved,
I’ll show you someone disgustingly depraved.

You see, when the pain is too much, I have this devise;
I’ll show you how it stops with just the first little slice.

I’ll just drag this blade across each of my wrists,
I’ll show you my scars where the pain persists.

A dark and gruesome release into ecstasy,
I’ll show you how death became my fantasy.

Copyright Â© Shadows_In_The_Darkness ... [ 2007-11-26 18:36:27]
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Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by MemeCaroline on Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 07:18:02 PM AEST
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You are very talented, but I feel so very sad for you. I hope you can make it out of this prison of pain you seem to be in.

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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Hi.i don't know you.or your personal situation.But i know pain so bad it makes you want to not be on the earth.Whatever it is that your going thru, Please don't let it take you away.This poem is so sad, but its written beautifully.Continue to express yourself, and please continue to live.good luck to you.

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 04:09:55 AM AEST
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Such sadness and raw pain come across in this poem. I felt compelled to comment, as I myself have felt/feel this way sometimes, as the prvious poster said, I hope that you can find your way back to the light , great write, well put together!
hugs
Pix xx

Re: I'll Show You (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:23:59 AM AEST
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The thing is... we were never "angels". We were never in the Light; we were only in a protected sphere to begin with. Now, though, the sphere melts away. And we have to search for the Light. Get up and get after it. It's not easy; energy itself is one of the hardest things to conjure up. but is it really harder than suffering?

Andrew

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