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Array ( [sid] => 138786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cure [time] => 2007-11-26 14:51:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cure
November 25, 2007

Who do I belong to?
Where am I to go?
When the day is done and through,
This I’d like to know.
Promise me a day will come,
With answers to my fears.
Show me that there is a way,
To cure the loss of tears.
I long to know a visionary,
Who can open up these eyes,
But dread the sight that they might see,
If shown the truth of lies.
Cancel out the things I know,
For wishes I might make.
But take away the hopes I’ve grown,
And face the fiercest of mistakes.
Tell me I belong to you,
So of one thing I can be sure.
Promise me a day will come,
When you’ll provide the cure.
Tell me I belong to you,
And by your side I’ll stay.
Then when the day is done and through,
Only angst will fade away. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 48 [informant] => calista [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cure

Contributed by calista on Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 02:51:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Cure
November 25, 2007

Who do I belong to?
Where am I to go?
When the day is done and through,
This I’d like to know.
Promise me a day will come,
With answers to my fears.
Show me that there is a way,
To cure the loss of tears.
I long to know a visionary,
Who can open up these eyes,
But dread the sight that they might see,
If shown the truth of lies.
Cancel out the things I know,
For wishes I might make.
But take away the hopes I’ve grown,
And face the fiercest of mistakes.
Tell me I belong to you,
So of one thing I can be sure.
Promise me a day will come,
When you’ll provide the cure.
Tell me I belong to you,
And by your side I’ll stay.
Then when the day is done and through,
Only angst will fade away.

Copyright Â© calista ... [ 2007-11-26 14:51:49]
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Re: Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 10:19:39 AM AEST
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Very nicely done. Looks like you kept to the meaning and message of the piece rather than letting the rhymes pull you off, yet kept the rhyme going strong as well. Not an easy thing to pull off.

Andrew

Re: Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 03:32:13 AM AEST
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I thought this was wonderful. Really well executed and special. Very impressive.

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