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Array ( [sid] => 138733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Many,Many Tears [time] => 2007-11-24 08:43:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I awaken this morning at dawn

And the sun began to rise,

I walked on my porch to look toward
Heaven,

For I knew something was strange
When I awaken,

I thought I seen a beautiful angel
All dressed in white,

She smiled as she spoken to me

Her words were sad and tears filled
My eyes..

She said she came to take my father
Home to heaven

I began to cry,

For I did not want my father to leave
Me,

I walked back inside with tears streaming
Down my face..

My father seen my tears and ask me
Not to cry..

For he knew he was going to a beautiful
Paradise beyond the clouds in the sky

He told me the angel dressed in white
Was my mother..

And he loved her so..

My father said to me

Now I had an extra angel added to help
Watch over me..

His last words to me, was not to worry
And shred tears..

He loved his children

And would always be by our side..

He looked up toward heavens and
Closed his eyes..

And went to his new home in beyond
The sky..

I could not fight the tears, but
I know He’s in a better place..

I miss him something awful and
Tears fill my eyes..

Now my brother join my father and
My mother..

It seems so hard a thing to bear..

I Love you my father..

But ,why did you take my brother
In the days of such dismay,

For I loved him so...

The burden weight down with such
Heavy force..

Much morer burden to bear..

Now they all in heaven’s paradise
With my mother and God..

Tears still fill eyes and my heart
Weights heavy..

They say time will take away all the
Tears,

And fill the empty void in my heart

But right now, I certainly can’t tell..

For days, weeks the months into years
Just keep passing by,

And the tears keep falling

Lord,

Oh’ how I missed them
So.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 39 [informant] => candysears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Many,Many Tears

Contributed by candysears on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 08:43:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

As I awaken this morning at dawn

And the sun began to rise,

I walked on my porch to look toward
Heaven,

For I knew something was strange
When I awaken,

I thought I seen a beautiful angel
All dressed in white,

She smiled as she spoken to me

Her words were sad and tears filled
My eyes..

She said she came to take my father
Home to heaven

I began to cry,

For I did not want my father to leave
Me,

I walked back inside with tears streaming
Down my face..

My father seen my tears and ask me
Not to cry..

For he knew he was going to a beautiful
Paradise beyond the clouds in the sky

He told me the angel dressed in white
Was my mother..

And he loved her so..

My father said to me

Now I had an extra angel added to help
Watch over me..

His last words to me, was not to worry
And shred tears..

He loved his children

And would always be by our side..

He looked up toward heavens and
Closed his eyes..

And went to his new home in beyond
The sky..

I could not fight the tears, but
I know He’s in a better place..

I miss him something awful and
Tears fill my eyes..

Now my brother join my father and
My mother..

It seems so hard a thing to bear..

I Love you my father..

But ,why did you take my brother
In the days of such dismay,

For I loved him so...

The burden weight down with such
Heavy force..

Much morer burden to bear..

Now they all in heaven’s paradise
With my mother and God..

Tears still fill eyes and my heart
Weights heavy..

They say time will take away all the
Tears,

And fill the empty void in my heart

But right now, I certainly can’t tell..

For days, weeks the months into years
Just keep passing by,

And the tears keep falling

Lord,

Oh’ how I missed them
So..

Copyright Â© candysears ... [ 2007-11-24 08:43:32]
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Re: Many,Many Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 09:45:11 AM AEST
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I could feel the emotion pouring out of this.Moving yet portrayed with such grace
Great write

Steve

Re: Many,Many Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 04:49:03 PM AEST
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wow this is really sad and im sorry to hear about your losses but this is a beautiful poem and its very sad.. thanks for sharing.. God bless you and remember angels are always with you

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

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