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Array ( [sid] => 138707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Afraid [time] => 2007-11-23 03:08:58 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote in seventh grade and revised it slightly for this site. My teacher thought I copied it and refused to post it in the school newspaper. [bodytext] => There’s no one here to comfort me alone in this big house
And darkness closes in on me like a cat upon a mouse.

The emptiness of all the rooms echo every sound
And down the hall in the master room I hear a heartbeat pound.

I sit alone all huddled up in an old and creaking chair
Eyeing each corner of the room where shadows seem to stare.

Then suddenly at the porch window a silhouette appears
I scream in terror and cry for help as the apparition nears.

Lightening strikes and thunder booms and the white french doors blow wide
But I am rooted to the spot, I can not run and hide.

So I close my eyes and pinch myself to wake from this bad dream
And my crying out for deliverance is but a silent scream.

Then as the clock in the hall strikes one I awake and the noises cease
And now the house is only filled with strangely tranquil peace
………….but I am still afraid.

Caroline Smith
Revised on November 22, 2007
Originally written in seventh grade
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Afraid

Contributed by MemeCaroline on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 03:08:58 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



There’s no one here to comfort me alone in this big house
And darkness closes in on me like a cat upon a mouse.

The emptiness of all the rooms echo every sound
And down the hall in the master room I hear a heartbeat pound.

I sit alone all huddled up in an old and creaking chair
Eyeing each corner of the room where shadows seem to stare.

Then suddenly at the porch window a silhouette appears
I scream in terror and cry for help as the apparition nears.

Lightening strikes and thunder booms and the white french doors blow wide
But I am rooted to the spot, I can not run and hide.

So I close my eyes and pinch myself to wake from this bad dream
And my crying out for deliverance is but a silent scream.

Then as the clock in the hall strikes one I awake and the noises cease
And now the house is only filled with strangely tranquil peace
………….but I am still afraid.

Caroline Smith
Revised on November 22, 2007
Originally written in seventh grade




Copyright © MemeCaroline ... [ 2007-11-23 03:08:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Afraid (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 12:23:02 PM AEST
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Very nice write..You truly have a great talent..

Happy Thanksgiving To You & Yours

Blessings..
Honey56


Re: Afraid (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 09:55:58 AM AEST
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Well you obviously have a talent for words, maybe she was just in awe.
Sometimes teachers teach, but they forget to learn !!

Steve




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