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And now I've told you how I've felt
Contributed by
Dimes
on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 11:13:20 AM in AEST
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And now, Ive told you how Ive felt
Spilling my soul all over your face
And I see I am brave enough
And have nothing left to hide.
I hid from you yesterday-
I was terrified of what you may say-
Up until the last few minutes
When you said,
Hi, Chris, hi, Andrew,
You
You had your hair down
And said those words as if I never said anything strange to you.
But when I left,
And you said Bye, Chris,
And I look looked into your eyes
I saw something different
Something new
In them.
Was it disgust? Pity? Love?
I couldnt tell.
But for once, you actually looked back into
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Dimes
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2007-11-20 11:13:20]
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Re: And now I've told you how I've felt
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 11:41:13 AM AEST
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This is truly deep!
Nice write..
Blessings...Honey |
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Re: And now I've told you how I've felt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 12:21:22 PM AEST
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It was like I was there. Well written.
God bless. |
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