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Array ( [sid] => 138571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Ever Lasting Today [time] => 2007-11-17 02:34:10 [hometext] => I Was just expressing how i felt at the moment, so this may not be the best poem out there. I am also very new to writing poems if this can be considered one. [bodytext] => Today is ever lasting
For today is a day I do what I must
Not something I want to do
But something I can’t avoid

Today will be an ever lasting day
For today I confront that which I fear
Not something I alone fear
But something many fear as well

Today has been an ever lasting day
For today I have done something which many can’t
Not a murder or any type of felony
But an expression of my feelings

Today is at its peek
Though it might not have gone so well
And I feel lower than I ever had before
I know that today will end soon enough
And a new today will start tomorrow

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 65 [informant] => Hsv1203 [notes] =>

Edited, as requested in Site Help. - Moderator_14 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

An Ever Lasting Today

Contributed by Hsv1203 on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 02:34:10 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Today is ever lasting
For today is a day I do what I must
Not something I want to do
But something I can’t avoid

Today will be an ever lasting day
For today I confront that which I fear
Not something I alone fear
But something many fear as well

Today has been an ever lasting day
For today I have done something which many can’t
Not a murder or any type of felony
But an expression of my feelings

Today is at its peek
Though it might not have gone so well
And I feel lower than I ever had before
I know that today will end soon enough
And a new today will start tomorrow

Copyright Â© Hsv1203 ... [ 2007-11-17 02:34:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Ever Lasting Today (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 04:27:14 AM AEST
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Your feeling overflows in this poem and yes it is a very good poem..

Blessings.

Re: An Ever Lasting Today (User Rating: 1 )
by Hsv1203 on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 05:07:48 AM AEST
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Ty very much for the comment. near the end it says "Though it might have gone so well" i miss typed it is suppose to be "Though it might not have gone so well" and i dont know how to change it.

Re: An Ever Lasting Today (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 12:00:41 PM AEST
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If you write from the heart and write for yourself, it doesn't really matter what others think.
You've done that here, you should be proud of what you have achieved.
Well done

Steve

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