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Array ( [sid] => 138562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The best seem to leave [time] => 2007-11-16 17:13:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its those nights you realize youre all alone
Youre thinking to yourself, "I bet no one has every felt this bad before."
Youre lying there, almost lifeless
Thinking of all the people who broke your heart
Crushed your dreams
Left you behind
Forgot about you
And stabbed you in the back

Oh how kind some people are, pretending they care
Well, maybe a few
Really do

But everyone who ever meant anything
Always seem to leave [comments] => 4 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 75 [informant] => the_unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
The best seem to leave

Contributed by the_unknown on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 05:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Its those nights you realize youre all alone
Youre thinking to yourself, "I bet no one has every felt this bad before."
Youre lying there, almost lifeless
Thinking of all the people who broke your heart
Crushed your dreams
Left you behind
Forgot about you
And stabbed you in the back

Oh how kind some people are, pretending they care
Well, maybe a few
Really do

But everyone who ever meant anything
Always seem to leave




Copyright © the_unknown ... [ 2007-11-16 17:13:06]
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Re: The best seem to leave (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 11:25:10 PM AEST
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I might not agree with your ending...but its poetry and each one is bound by his perceptions...overall very moving and a thinking poetry...


Re: The best seem to leave (User Rating: 1 )
by BornReckless on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 06:26:59 AM AEST
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the ones who truly care and will never leave, are few are far in between, they are a rare species, but anyway i liked your poem.


jj


Re: The best seem to leave (User Rating: 1 )
by meadcomposition on Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 02:11:04 AM AEST
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I've felt this way many a time.
Keep it up.


Re: The best seem to leave (User Rating: 1 )
by musicXisXlife on Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:23:02 PM AEST
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Sigh. I like the first stanza especially. But this is depressing. :( I won't leave you my dear.




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