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Array ( [sid] => 138555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hiding [time] => 2007-11-16 10:28:27 [hometext] => In the Mind of The Lost and Demented! [bodytext] => I am the something hiding deep within your soul. I am the something that tells you what is happening around you, you don't want to believe me, but i tell you still I am the something that tells you what you need to do. I tell you that they are not to be trusted, they are ruthless, out to get you. They do nothing but talk about you behind your back. Cut them off, you dont need them I tell you. Hide yourself let me take care of you I am always here for you, You dont need them, they do nothing but bring you pain, I look out for you. They put on their smiles and wave at you and say hello in their sweet voices, but they don't mean it. They dont care about you the way I do, They invite you out with them. Tell them no, tell them no. They will do nothing, but try to embarrass you, hurt you, abandon you. You dont need them you have me. No go, leave them, go to your dark side of the room, you dont need anybody but me. You may not be able to see me but I am here hiding within your head I am everything you are not, I am your courage, I am your hope, I am your life, your life is my own. You may not be able to see me, but I am here hiding in the dark part of you as you are hiding in the dark part of the room, hiding, waiting, wasting life, I do nothing but look out for you. You dont need anybody but me. I am your one friend for all eternity. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rico [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Hiding

Contributed by rico on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 10:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I am the something hiding deep within your soul. I am the something that tells you what is happening around you, you don't want to believe me, but i tell you still I am the something that tells you what you need to do. I tell you that they are not to be trusted, they are ruthless, out to get you. They do nothing but talk about you behind your back. Cut them off, you dont need them I tell you. Hide yourself let me take care of you I am always here for you, You dont need them, they do nothing but bring you pain, I look out for you. They put on their smiles and wave at you and say hello in their sweet voices, but they don't mean it. They dont care about you the way I do, They invite you out with them. Tell them no, tell them no. They will do nothing, but try to embarrass you, hurt you, abandon you. You dont need them you have me. No go, leave them, go to your dark side of the room, you dont need anybody but me. You may not be able to see me but I am here hiding within your head I am everything you are not, I am your courage, I am your hope, I am your life, your life is my own. You may not be able to see me, but I am here hiding in the dark part of you as you are hiding in the dark part of the room, hiding, waiting, wasting life, I do nothing but look out for you. You dont need anybody but me. I am your one friend for all eternity.




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Re: Hiding (User Rating: 1 )
by Ty6687 on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 10:54:45 AM AEST
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thats a pretty cool poem. i like the mood it creates




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