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Array ( [sid] => 138476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love [time] => 2007-11-13 10:23:23 [hometext] => read between the lines to know the real meaning [bodytext] => Murder, murder, murder
Surrender, just surrender
No one can fight off love
Not even with help from above

She'll kill you just to end it
Don't even think she'll give a ****
Just another name off a song
Acting like you didn't do anything wrong

See the pain that's in his eyes
Coming from the photo, that'll make you cry
****** lie
One sad word, just suicide

He couldn't reach the end
So how'd he pull the trigger then?
A mix of stupidity and hate
His life is over, but choose her fate

Suicide, suicide
One more voice, and I'll ******* die
'Cause no one can fight off love
Not even with help from above

Load him up full of heroin
He couldn't move but just then
His body, which couldn't move
Got up and sent him just one smooth

Load the story up with more heroine
No one suspects the pleading wife
But we all see what happened then
When something ended his life

You said before he tried to die
There's only the question, why
Why would he do it for something he didn't need
Something that made his brain, tragically bleed

One word rings through the darkness and despair
SUICIDE
Sink to my knees and start to cry
All from one drunks stupid lie

Love
Couldn't do it herself, save her shame
Love
Is to blame
Put her back where she came

Hell
It's to nice for Satan itself
Knowing everyone hates you
Is just as well
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Amicus [notes] => Mod 9 11/12/07 Bleep words. Please bleep the whole word. Thanks [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Love

Contributed by Amicus on Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Murder, murder, murder
Surrender, just surrender
No one can fight off love
Not even with help from above

She'll kill you just to end it
Don't even think she'll give a ****
Just another name off a song
Acting like you didn't do anything wrong

See the pain that's in his eyes
Coming from the photo, that'll make you cry
****** lie
One sad word, just suicide

He couldn't reach the end
So how'd he pull the trigger then?
A mix of stupidity and hate
His life is over, but choose her fate

Suicide, suicide
One more voice, and I'll ******* die
'Cause no one can fight off love
Not even with help from above

Load him up full of heroin
He couldn't move but just then
His body, which couldn't move
Got up and sent him just one smooth

Load the story up with more heroine
No one suspects the pleading wife
But we all see what happened then
When something ended his life

You said before he tried to die
There's only the question, why
Why would he do it for something he didn't need
Something that made his brain, tragically bleed

One word rings through the darkness and despair
SUICIDE
Sink to my knees and start to cry
All from one drunks stupid lie

Love
Couldn't do it herself, save her shame
Love
Is to blame
Put her back where she came

Hell
It's to nice for Satan itself
Knowing everyone hates you
Is just as well




Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2007-11-13 10:23:23]
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Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 12:10:04 PM AEST
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Wow, Amicus.
Your view on love seems to be, well, tragic...
I liked this poem a lot.
It packs a lot of power...
Keep writing, my friend!
And good luck in love, too!


Re: Love (User Rating: 1 )
by willwinuk on Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 05:27:21 AM AEST
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Very good :)




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