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Array ( [sid] => 138378 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Choose [time] => 2007-11-09 12:25:20 [hometext] => please tell me how you think this poem is, since its one of my better ones. i would greatly appreciate it [bodytext] => Life in hell...death in heaven
lost with a good family...good with a lost family
you choose
work hard and receive nothing...don't work and receive everything
rich with a terrible past...poor with a terrible life
my turn...I choose
sorrow, misery, pain...happiness, love sunshine
blind in the world of seeing...seeing in the world of blind, nothing
Cars, streets, malls, traffic, and freedom...Fresh air, friends, family wild and love

How can you choose?
Either live a bad life in a good world
OR
live a good life in a bad world
either way down the road will it still be bad?
wrong...I choose both
In my past...the love
In the present...freedom
In the future... who really knows
Me, you, her, him, them...maybe
do we really know...you choose
th path [comments] => 0 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 73 [informant] => sensible_paper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Choose

Contributed by sensible_paper on Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 12:25:20 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Life in hell...death in heaven
lost with a good family...good with a lost family
you choose
work hard and receive nothing...don't work and receive everything
rich with a terrible past...poor with a terrible life
my turn...I choose
sorrow, misery, pain...happiness, love sunshine
blind in the world of seeing...seeing in the world of blind, nothing
Cars, streets, malls, traffic, and freedom...Fresh air, friends, family wild and love

How can you choose?
Either live a bad life in a good world
OR
live a good life in a bad world
either way down the road will it still be bad?
wrong...I choose both
In my past...the love
In the present...freedom
In the future... who really knows
Me, you, her, him, them...maybe
do we really know...you choose
th path

Copyright © sensible_paper ... [ 2007-11-09 12:25:20]
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