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[title] => I'll Never Say a Word
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[bodytext] => The time has come to pull out the screams inside my head, I want to give them to you and yet never make a sound. You've given me pain and have never hurt yourself, watched me cry and yet never shed a tear...I could touch you and you would never feel the warmth from my skin, you're so cold you're frozen, unfeeling stone. I've watched you tear me down, I've felt you break my heart, and in your heart there's just no place for me...Find it written on the wall, in my favorite shade of lipstick just for you to see,how it's come a time to end the likes of you and me. I never could have given you enough, you'd always want just one more piece, enough of my soul to have control over me...But here I am and now look, Im breaking you down...Taking back everything I gave you...does it make you feel like less of a man when you cant bend me, when you cant break me like you used to? Here, take back all the screams you left me with, Im giving them back to you in my broken, sad, twisted little smile...And I promise, I'll never say one word...
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I'll Never Say a Word
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angel_facing_judgement
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Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 01:57:33 AM in AEST
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The time has come to pull out the screams inside my head, I want to give them to you and yet never make a sound. You've given me pain and have never hurt yourself, watched me cry and yet never shed a tear...I could touch you and you would never feel the warmth from my skin, you're so cold you're frozen, unfeeling stone. I've watched you tear me down, I've felt you break my heart, and in your heart there's just no place for me...Find it written on the wall, in my favorite shade of lipstick just for you to see,how it's come a time to end the likes of you and me. I never could have given you enough, you'd always want just one more piece, enough of my soul to have control over me...But here I am and now look, Im breaking you down...Taking back everything I gave you...does it make you feel like less of a man when you cant bend me, when you cant break me like you used to? Here, take back all the screams you left me with, Im giving them back to you in my broken, sad, twisted little smile...And I promise, I'll never say one word...
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Re: I'll Never Say a Word
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 08:43:10 AM AEST
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| I really liked this! I can feel venom in your tone. Very good expression of a familiar situation. I think the prosaic lineation suited the poem too. Nice one! |
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Re: I'll Never Say a Word
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by law_glen18 on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 08:02:59 PM AEST
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| Very powerful and enchanting write. Nice Work!!! |
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