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Array ( [sid] => 138259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is me [time] => 2007-11-04 06:58:12 [hometext] => Living my life in hell, living it the way I only way I know. This is me. [bodytext] => Wake up and smile,
living a lie
every thing's so great
All of it's so fake

this is who I am

The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins

wake up in hell,
Daddy I love you
mommy I hate you
somebody save me

look back and regret
what you've broken
and all you've thrown away

don't no where to pick up
and begin again

this is who I am

The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins

living like this
maybe there's something to hold onto
maybe something to lose
living like this you'll never no [comments] => 4 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

This is me

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 06:58:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Wake up and smile,
living a lie
every thing's so great
All of it's so fake

this is who I am

The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins

wake up in hell,
Daddy I love you
mommy I hate you
somebody save me

look back and regret
what you've broken
and all you've thrown away

don't no where to pick up
and begin again

this is who I am

The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins

living like this
maybe there's something to hold onto
maybe something to lose
living like this you'll never no

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2007-11-04 06:58:12]
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Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by -Nik-91- on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 09:53:01 AM AEST
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i like your poem its good keep writting xxxx

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:09:19 AM AEST
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Great poem

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 01:08:46 PM AEST
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Great write. Very relate able.

Re: This is me (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:58:25 PM AEST
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Great write. I can relate to this a lot

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